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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-09-11 07:46 PM


If Given Sincere

I know what I feel.
I know that some things
that happen are not real.
To be real is to sincerely
feel the words that you say.
And some don't really feel
the words, they just say certain
words in hopes to get their way.
Words to take a heart away.
Words that are
suggestive and clear.
Words I eagerly
wish to hear.
Lovely words,
if given
sincere.

JamesLee
September08
2003

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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-09-11 09:17 PM


you always write "so true".


I enjoy your words James...they always have a soft touch even in scolding

M

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-09-11 09:43 PM


Ah, to know the difference between cheap talk and utterances from the heart...


EA

kaile
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singapore
3 posted 2003-09-14 12:20 PM


nodding head at your words..so true
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-09-14 12:40 PM


hope that you are given sincere words from a sincere heart
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