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Abe
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Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end!

0 posted 2003-09-11 07:23 PM



YESTERDAY

My heart was really aching
And I cried, for half, this day
I yearned for one to talk to
But, I got the pay-back, pay.

Nowhere to turn my heart
From those, I turned away
And no way, to be heard
Anything, I had to say.

Oh, they read my words
And said, I had the way
But, all that I have said
I should’ve said, yesterday!

Del


9-11-2003

Del "Abe" Jones

© Copyright 2003 Del - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2003-09-11 07:29 PM



But....it's never too late

love your poem, much truth there

Titia


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (09-12-2003 10:14 AM).]

Kahlil
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2 posted 2003-09-12 12:31 PM


What are you talking about? NO "shoulds" here!!  I got so much out your writing today.  Keep on!

Stick your hand out now, and I'll rap your knuckles for ya'....~K~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-09-12 01:04 AM


point well taken

thank you Del

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4 posted 2003-09-12 02:13 AM


Amen to that -- I do know that feeling well, just as you bring it here.

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2003-09-12 12:06 PM


Sadly, we're all guilty of that...leaving something unsaid, or saying it too late.


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2003-09-12 12:09 PM



Thank you, Abe...

EvocativeVerse2
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7 posted 2003-09-12 12:10 PM


There is always more to say. Love it. I think my own poetic song will end roughly 10 years after I have departed this realm! (Wink!) They can take my keyboard when they can pry it from my hands. Wonderful poem Abe. Keep it up.
icebox
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in the shadows
8 posted 2003-09-12 02:18 PM


Don't should on yourself!  It stains the soul.



Enchantress
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Canada eh.
9 posted 2003-09-12 02:23 PM


Well written Del,...and much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-09-12 02:32 PM


Del, I enjoyed reading this. We have all
felt this at some time or other...like we
could have said more...or less.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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