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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-11 12:06 PM

Sensitive Screen

tenderly at the age of three
I began my lifetime venture
of window watching at the place
of interlocking threaded patterns
learning inside and out this
covered wire netted surface curtain
and how strong these tiny lines are
this organized web of fabricated metal
but my mind does not let me understand
totally this cover of protection
so I still reach out to unlock separation
delicate young fingers saw the beauty
of flight so I followed the buzzing
with the tip of my heart
it stung me then
it stings me now

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-09-11 12:25 PM

covered wire netted surface curtain
and how strong these tiny lines are
this organized web of fabricated metal

Lots to ponder here, loved the buzz Helen~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-09-11 12:27 PM

learning inside and out this
covered wire netted surface curtain
and how strong these tiny lines are
this organized web of fabricated metal
but my mind does not let me understand
totally this cover of protection
no we rarely understand all the protective mechanisms and devices....

you wove this well..and met the challenge with grace and style

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

3 posted 2003-09-11 12:30 PM

I read Ron's challenge and
    feel you have met it well.

  Everything written on these Blue pages show depths of Life,
    stages, if you will.
  With your special touch you have shared the stage and
  expanded beyond it.

              I, for one, can feel your words.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-09-11 04:12 PM

you're just, amazing.. you know? simply amazing

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-09-11 04:37 PM

A lot of grace, and style...
yes, Helen, challenge well met, indeed!

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-09-11 04:58 PM

I'm ditto-ing Raph.. You ARE amazing.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

7 posted 2003-09-11 08:56 PM

The fascination
of the child
tempered in sting
gives way to
the curiosity
of the woman
lured to
the screened image

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2003-09-11 09:05 PM

"with the tip of my heart"

Leave it to you to find the perfect way to say it. Casual things like this define the word "creative"....

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alisa
Member

since 2003-08-20

Posts 70
Florida

9 posted 2003-09-14 12:06 PM

you take such simple things and make them amazing....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-09-14 01:08 AM

I love this

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

11 posted 2003-09-14 08:39 AM

Challenge well met Helen
and please keep it open
no matter the sting
is too good to keep closed
*smile*
xxoo

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

12 posted 2003-09-14 01:17 PM

the queen she-bee
spirit walks through walls
on water
screens
can't hold her

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