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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-09-11 09:24 AM



I wonder how you're doing
if your heart is still hurting
how today is affecting you
the day you were nearly killed

I regret giving up on you
wish you were still here today
Wish I could hold you tight
Tell you it'd be alright

Please know you're in my prayers
Never far from my thoughts too
Wondering if you're happy now
Just wish I knew you were ok

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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1 posted 2003-09-11 09:30 AM


very heart felt write,,

                   

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2 posted 2003-09-11 09:39 AM




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Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-11-2003 09:40 AM).]

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3 posted 2003-09-11 10:30 AM


Heartfelt write. I think we've all wanted such an answer at one time or another. You made me wonder about a few things too...thanks.
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4 posted 2003-09-11 11:20 AM


glad I could make ya think EvocativeVerse...I like when poems/writings/sayings make me think

Thanks Shara and Qj....

"Vision without action is a daydream.  Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb
~ KS

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