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Maddy vanD
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Newfoundland, Canada

0 posted 2003-09-11 07:20 AM


BURNING BUILDINGS

I awoke to the sound of shouting outside my door
Turned the tv on, and stood there rooted to the floor
By the beauty of the airplane's graceful flying
And the burning buildings along the river's shore

I stayed home and cried, just watching throughout the day
Trying to find an answer, or the words with which to pray
Could almost hear the sound of the people dying
In the burning buildings seen from across the bay

Heard his voice break, the children sitting by his knee
What will become of them all, down in the land of the free
All around the world, people are crying
As the burning buildings collapse into debris

Please someone explain it to me, if you think you can
What drives someone to do these things to their fellow man
In that moment there was no way of denying
That the burning buildings made us all American

Maddy
Poetry is not pretty....poetry is real

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1 posted 2003-09-11 09:12 AM


I think it made us all human..and perhaps showed us we are not so different one frm the other when it comes to the things that others inflict on us...

hard to think we still fight over the petty things and forget those lessons so cruel...

enjoyed your write...

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2 posted 2003-09-11 09:17 AM


Very well said Maddy.
Enjoyed the read.
~Hugs~

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3 posted 2003-09-11 04:18 PM




(big hugggsssssss) And if that didn't make us all American, then God have mercy on all our children and may they be taught the values of love and kindness! (wipes tears) Why someone can be compelled to perform such treachery, we may never know, but the children are the key to our future and by teaching them the values of love and not hatred, we can avoid such tragedies to ever repeat themselves, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maddy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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