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The Mountain Peak
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The Mountain Peak |
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serametheicebound New Member
since 2003-09-04
Posts 8South Africa-Free State |
THE MOUNTAIN PEAK I who peers at the mountein peak And stares with an eye that bleeds Blood vomited by the volcanic soul vessel that lost peace This calprit peak conceals my psyche's confit hug and kiss Now ICEBOUND expound profound Desires to touch the mountain peak For the pallace that turned my soul Into a battlefield is now renamed THE MOUNTAIN PEAK, AND THE MOUNTAIN PEAK The Conquest Is My Daily Testament |
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serametheicebound New Member
since 2003-09-04
Posts 8South Africa-Free State |
Please respond to this lines!!! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Desires to touch the mountain peak For the pallace that turned my soul Into a battlefield is now renamed THE MOUNTAIN PEAK, AND THE MOUNTAIN PEAK ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The way I understand this...is that you've finally reached a hard task, a goal...your mountain peak.... nice job and congrats! and welcome! "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
May your climb be a joyful rewarding one. WELCOME to Passions! There are many forums to climb around in here, hope to see you visitng the prose section as well. HAVE FUN, and keep posting.  |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Interesting. Kind of dark at first...then soaring to the heights. It made me stop and think. Thanks. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serame, 30 minutes from the time of posting on the boards isn't enough, sometimes, for us to wake up and be responding to everyone. Give us time... Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? [This message has been edited by Sunshine (09-12-2003 02:16 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your entrance post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Serame - This poem is written with some intriguing lines. I'll read it again, but I'm not swift like a lot of the people on this board, so I may not understand everything you meant to say. OK? While I may be slow, I'm sure of this - welcome to these boards. The people here will lift you up and encourage you to write. Just a small warning DO NOT TRUST ANYONE BUT ME. BALLADEER IS A RASCAL AND A SCALAWAG! TOERAG IS A MINION OF THE DEVIL! DO NOT TRUST THOSE TWO RASCALS! TRUST ONLY ME! With those heart-felt warnings out of the way, you can confide in me all your most intimate secrets. Simply email them to me: Blabbermouth@HotHotmail.com. I'll be sure to not tell your deepest secrets to anyone (who is not a subscriber). OK? Your friend and new confidant, Long John (Kitty kicker) |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I hope that you enjoy these blue pages as much as I do. Thanks,  Ethel (Oh, and LongJohn is another of our nuts around here. You have to just keep your eye on him and some of the others...especially the ones he mentioned!!!)  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Good luck on your climb, dearest friend, this is a brave and mighty debut, and I know if you know what you must do, you will accomplish what you set your heart to, as perserverance is your middle name! (smiles) God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your beautiful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions Enjoyed your first post. Chris  |
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