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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-09-11 03:44 AM




twas justa long walk we took
into a new dimension

we crossed many obstacles
along our way

sometimes stumbling and
tripping along our journey
and each time helping each
along

you were there to tender my
scrapes n bruises and I was
there for you

I still recall us skipping and
strolling and singing songs
of love along the way

fondest were our nite time
walks under sky of moon
and stars

I remember our lips caressing
each with you snuggling
close when the nite air was chill

have we left this dimension or
lost the thrill?

                   

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-09-11 05:46 AM


Sometimes we have to create the thrill.. memories..they do this..

beautiful

Sunnyone
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2 posted 2003-09-11 04:34 PM


I think there comes a point when lovers become so comfortable with each other, that everything seems predictable.  You haven't really lost the thrill, you just have to throw in a few unexpected surprises, eh?  Enjoyed this one...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-09-11 04:36 PM




(sigh) I can understand this feeling, dearest friend, sometimes when you love someone so much, the love can feel monotonous, so it never hurts to suprise or creatively make your love smile! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, hope all is well, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Glenn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Janette
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4 posted 2003-09-11 10:37 PM


Please, never lose the thrill ... keep on seeking it, always.

Thoughtful piece you have penned here dear, Sir.

Enjoyed.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-09-11 10:59 PM


Q, you are just too imaginative, creative and romantic to let the humdrums take the spark out of either hers or your spark plugs! lol


EA

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