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MERCURY
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0 posted 2003-09-11 03:30 AM


ITS A RAINY SOAKED NECK AFTERNOON

A QUICK SQUINTED GLANCE SIDEWAYS TO ANOTHER OF LIFES DROWNED

A BRIEF CALMING DRAG IN A MOMENT OF SHELTER

LIFE AS ALWAYS MANAGES STILL TO ASTOUND



AN OCCASSIONAL GRASP OF PANICKED AIR

ECHOING A PNEUMATIC SOUND OF SILENCE

AN AEROPLANE JETS BY VIA THE HEAVENS

I GUESS MAN HAS PASSED THAT LICENCE



MY HEARTS YEARNS FOR CALM

LIKE A ZEBRA FELLED AND CAUGHT

BY AN ALWAYS OVERPOWERING RELENTLESS TIGER

WE JUST KNOW WE WILL BE OUTFOUGHT



BUT FORTUNE FAVOURS THE BRAVE

AND ITS PATHETIC TO GIVE UP

TO THOSE OF US WHO ARE STILL TRUE TO LIFES CAUSE

CONQUER WITHIN AND SHAPEUP



FOR FEELINGS HAVE A HABIT OF CHANGING

UNPREDICTABLE KNOWS NO END

LIKE A SNOW COVERED MOUNTAIN CAUGHT IN A WHISPER

TO THINK OF IT , LIFE IS A GODSEND



FOR OUR MENTAL STATE IS FLUCTIONAL

SOMETIMES EVEN OFF THE CHART

FREQUENTLY MAKING A HELL OUT OF HEAVEN

BUT LOVE IS ALL AROUND SO KEEP IT CLOSE TO YOUR HEART.





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KristieSue
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1 posted 2003-09-11 11:34 AM


nice job!!!!

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Sunnyone
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2 posted 2003-09-11 11:41 AM


IT REALLY IS PATHETIC TO GIVE UP!!!!  MY DEAR GRANDMA USED TO SAY THAT ONLY COWARDS QUIT AND SHE WAS RIGHT...MUCH ENJOYED THIS ONE...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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3 posted 2003-09-11 03:41 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Yes...what's done is done...but any smoke or fire or deafening cry will never stop us, as love perserveres over every tear and carries us to the light, which the torch Lady Liberty herself yields high shines with! (wipes tears) God Bless You, sweet friend, let us always remenber our heroes, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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