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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-09-10 06:49 PM


Wisk me away, to the September ball
In the arms of the sun
Sparkles leave me enthrall
When the temperatures tickle
In a fickle found warm
Wisk me away,
To the frosted fall corn

Fields turn gold
Inch by inch, from lush green
In a regal lament
Until color is scene
From the tips to the trunks
A completed arrange
Wisk me away,
To the harvest of change

Slowly the turning
Unrushed and unheard
From the lush grown so vibrant
Let my heart hear each word
In the coming of cooler
In the color of crisp
Wisk me on breezes,
Breathed in deep dazzle brisk

Take me to seasons
Of full gantlet prize
Touch of my soul
Through ecstatic wide eyes
Sing out the beauty
I've waited to gaze
Wisk me to autumn,
In it's spectacle days

Copyright Kkh 9/10/03

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (09-10-2003 06:51 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2003-09-10 06:53 PM



"Slowly the turning
Unrushed and unheard
From the lush grown so vibrant
Let my heart hear each word
In the coming of cooler
In the color of crisp
Whisk me on breezes,
Breathed in deep dazzle brisk"

Kathleen...this is simply beautiful, my friend.
I could feel the cool, refreshing breeze as I read.

Hugs,
~Vicky

If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
2 posted 2003-09-10 06:58 PM


very beautiful,,

                   

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2003-09-10 08:53 PM


it really is a beauty, autumn
altho i prefer heat, i could never be too far away from the fall spectacle
gorgeous, just gorgeous your tribute to the season

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-09-10 11:09 PM


"Wisk me to autumn,
In it's spectacle days"

~ and that is what you have done for me--and in such a spectacular manner! Thank you, TD!


EA

angelblueyes
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
5 posted 2003-09-10 11:12 PM


You've taken me to look at autumn's view a differnet way.Thank you for opening my eyes.
Crystal

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