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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-09-10 02:38 PM





Precipice, precipice
Some whispered word rings eerily
Standing here in rapid winds
Craggy, this rock’s face a'fore me

Precipice, precipice
I face the fears inside my soul;
This cliff dares me the climb
With living on my only goal

Precipice, precipice
Mountain’s crag finds finger’s hold
And still the whisper in my mind
As if a bell’s been tolled

If I fall, the abyss swallows
The sheerest drop, my future known
Suddenly a metamorphosis
Into my soul a light is shone…

Prince of Peace, Prince of Peace
How fine the line so broken
From the precipice of unknown
The Prince of Peace has spoken

Where once I stood the precipice
Now Love gives the Prince of Peace


~*~

©Karilea Rilling Jungel
13 March 2002

© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2003-09-10 02:49 PM



Karilea...this is beautiful.
Thanks so much for reposting it,
and especially with me in mind.
You are too good to me.

Thank you...

If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-09-10 03:02 PM


Very beautiful smiling lady..
You are a true friend.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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3 posted 2003-09-10 03:40 PM


This gesture of friendship blessed us all with a beautiful read...thank you, Sun-sis!! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
4 posted 2003-09-11 09:58 PM


Karilea, what a beautiful present for a beautiful Lady

Prince of Peace, Prince of Peace
How fine the line so broken
From the precipice of unknown
The Prince of Peace has spoken

amazing the both of you
xxoo

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