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Inked Bouquet
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Inked Bouquet |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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Inked Bouquet  This day I come in heart's traverse With spill of quill in simple verse A simple blossom, pure...complete To fill your day with fragrance sweet A simple touch upon the hand In reassure of understand A simple ear in listening To hear disheartened spirit sing A simple prayer for inner peace That all your troubles soon may cease A simple rhyme in inked bouquet I gift, with love, to you this day ~vlraynes To a friend...with love...  If you judge people, you have no time to love them. --Mother Teresa [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-10-2003 03:19 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
thank you vicky for a wonderfull Inked Bouquet,,, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Inked upon my altar cloth. Lovely lovely heart you have there--thank you for giving us a piece of that.  lub ya lady.  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vicky, this is an absolutely beautiful Poem. I love the rose, too. Thanks for being you, sweet friend.  Hugs Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God, Vicky this is timeless . . . what a sweet soul you have and right back to you Lady . . . This is perfection: With spill of quill in simple verse (simple verse . . . plbbbt!) I adore this line Beautiful heart you have xxoo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your friends are so fortunate... I know. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
A most beautiful sweet blend to share friend to friend I truly loved this Hope |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This is kindness itself. There's a human side of this town we live in, and it's all too easy to forget. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
What a lovely bouquet!  very nice for your friend, my friend.. hugs, g "Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
and your friend is very lucky to recieve such a beautiful gift of thoughts!! This is so fresh and alive, that I can smell the scent of that rose, Vicky...thank you for the beauty today!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Vicky, your friend is so fortunate to have you for a friend. This is beautiful. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky, dear friend. A flower can mean so many things, and with the sweetness that comes with your words...it is a beautiful gift causing smiles. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes Why thank you love.  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a sweet and delicate write. A gift indeed...as are you Vicky. TD |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ This is really nice~ I'm sure your many friends found the FTP Florist (From The Poetess) knocking on their hearts this day~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Vicky~ I read this and pretended it was for me... Thank you! Susan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This day I come in heart's traverse With spill of quill in simple verse A simple blossom, pure...complete To fill your day with fragrance sweet A simple touch upon the hand In reassure of understand =========================== as someone above said...this kind of cadenced kissed verse is indeed timeless... classic poetry with rhymes divine and kind intend...what could be better...lovely write poetess V-girlie.  "When your own emptiness is all thats gettin thru |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Wonderfully penned! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
To Mum... "A simple ear in listening To hear disheartened spirit sing A simple prayer for inner peace That all your troubles soon may cease" Love, me There's nothing like a good fight with a horse to put your problems into perspective |
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