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SmartChick
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0 posted 2003-09-09 08:49 PM



Hoping
Faithful desire
Of anticipation
To succeed in this world alone
Success is mine to accomplish myself
With no one here to hinder me
Therefore I will succeed
Standing alone
Hoping



© Copyright 2003 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-09-09 08:57 PM



Sue...not only will you succeed in life,
but you have also succeeded in writing
a lovely rictameter.   Beautifully done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-09-09 09:16 PM


how very true your penning is,,

enjoyed this very much,,,

               

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3 posted 2003-09-09 09:17 PM


A beautiful rictameter Sue!
And you will succeed in this life!
...and probably not alone for long.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

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   I still have sand in my shoes ~

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4 posted 2003-09-09 09:19 PM


Hi Sue! Well done! Love this. Hope you are well and happy. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers
That perches in the soul ~
            Emily Dickinson




    

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5 posted 2003-09-09 09:42 PM


SweetDarlingFriend~
See, IT IS PERFECT !!!!!!

I knew you could do it !!!!!
Sending *HUGLETS* your way~

It's BEAUTIFUL, SuzieQ~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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6 posted 2003-09-09 11:49 PM


Suzie, I love this.I know in my heart that you will succeed at anything you set your mind to.For you have the spirit of the tiger, the wings of an eagle, and the dreams of the sweet angels above.
Crystal

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7 posted 2003-09-10 06:44 AM



Counts like a Rictameter...
Looks like a Rictameter...
and the message?  Universal.

I'd say you did Just Fine,
Sue!

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8 posted 2003-09-10 06:46 AM


Aye, that it is -- and a good one!

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9 posted 2003-09-10 08:59 AM


I wish
I had written this, Sue...
yes you are strong~

I am hoping your day goes well
and I will be thinking about you
and your Mom
while I am away today.

hugsss
Maureen

littlewing
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10 posted 2003-09-10 09:05 AM


ahhh Good for You!
I am on the same path and hold your hand, if ya will . . .
'though you dont need mine, I need yours
Beautiful song of self
xxoo

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11 posted 2003-09-10 09:10 AM


SmartChick
Well done, enjoyed.

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12 posted 2003-09-10 09:14 AM



You are woman! You are strong! You are invincible! --and I read your up-lifting rictameter with a big smile across my face!

Loveya, Sweet Sue!
Linda

SmartChick
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13 posted 2003-09-10 09:43 AM


Thank you all for reading and replying.

And littlewing, I reach out my hand to you. Take hold and hang on tight. We will make it together. Hugs to you my friend.

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14 posted 2003-09-10 12:06 PM


Sue, sweet lady, this is PERFECT.....
both the rictameter and the message.
I'm glad that you're doing so well. My
thoughts and prayers are always with you, sweet friend.  
Hugs to you  
Ethel

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15 posted 2003-09-10 03:36 PM


Wonderful Write!!!
Good to see, and hear you
TD

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16 posted 2003-09-11 09:45 AM


enjoyed
SharaRose
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17 posted 2003-09-11 09:49 AM


And each day brings with it a new slate to perfect that all the more, and with the determination you have you will make the most of every day. Loved this!!!!


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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18 posted 2003-09-11 08:28 PM


another read...

*s
M

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