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Pilgrimage
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0 posted 2003-09-09 01:09 PM




Reach Out

“Reach out and grab the keys to life and death”,
the old man wheezed, and gusted sour breath.
I nodded slowly, closed my mouth and blinked
and cursed my fate. I’m just too nice, I let
old drunks and prophets pull me to their brink

and try to drag me on to that last step.
“Reach out and grab the keys to life and death.”
The old guy slurped his brew, tipped me a wink,
and stumbled to the door, and reeling, left.
Why is it me that draws the weakest link?

It must be written in the stars. I guess
their radar picks me out–and they all stink!
“Reach out and grab the keys to life and death.”
I’d like to grab the keys to someone’s Vette,
but I’d get caught and wind up in the clink,

surrounded by the smelly geezer set,
the cage door locked, my nose stuck in the chink
that lets in air. The thought brings on cold sweat.
“Reach out and grab the keys to life and death.”
Apocalyptic mummies ought to sink

into the swamp they came from. I’ll just bet
the next one on that stool’s another gink
with halitosis. I’ll go home to bed-
and there at last I’ll have a peaceful drink–
“Reach out and grab the keys to life and death.”


Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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1 posted 2003-09-09 02:44 PM


Ewwww.... you've got to find a nicer hangout.... those "Never-Totalled-Up-To-A-Single" bars just ain't the place for a girl like you.....

But wherever you go, write good stuff like this -- you give the rest of us a moon to shoot for....

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2 posted 2003-09-09 03:20 PM


Nan~
You are simply amazing !!!
This is sooo good~

And, my dear, just where were you one year ago ?
Miss you ... and we still have those little plant thingies we picked up in the gulf waters !  Can you believe it ?

Love you and your fantastic sense of humor~
HUGLETS
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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angelblueyes
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3 posted 2003-09-09 03:23 PM


This is really, really good.You amaze everytime.
Crystal

Pilgrimage
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4 posted 2003-09-09 04:41 PM


Ratleader-thank you for calling it good stuff. I was going to write something full of deep and cosmic meaning, but then I wrote this one instead.

Marge-hugs, girl. You know my Magnolia seed never grew me a tree? I guess it wanted to be in Florida. I'd like to be there myself!

Crystal-that is one of the nicest things anyone ever said to me. Thank you!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Martie
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5 posted 2003-09-09 11:30 PM


I enjoyed this so much, with a smile at you for the wit of it.  
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