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LukeatNFFC
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since 2003-07-09
Posts 42
Nottingham, England

0 posted 2003-09-09 11:59 AM


A collection of every poem I've ever posted on here which has been ignored..............

Violence-

Hold the silence,
Walk away,
Regret the violence,
Before you pay.

Don’t hit out,
Just pace your anger,
Be brave and stout,
Lonely stranger.

Listen to the words of experience,
Stay your hold on the trigger

Death-

Every breath I had taken,
He had taken with me,
Watching,
Waiting,
Following,
Longingly he whispered,
Instructions to my ear,
Carrying me along,
Through life and through my fear,
To pearly gates,
To open straights,
He knew the way,
I followed.
I knew the way,
He followed.

A Nightmare-

Falling, Screaming,
Into the night,
Darkness prying,
Enveloping light.

Shouting, Crying,
Refreshing the Fright,
feel like I'm dying,
Please end this night.

Shadows around me,
Creeping and Crawling,
Tearing My Lungs Out,
Screaming and Bawling.

That's one hell of a collection........not sure about the second one to be honest.......

© Copyright 2003 Luke - All Rights Reserved
LukeatNFFC
Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 42
Nottingham, England
1 posted 2003-09-09 01:41 PM


Oh......I'm being left out again....!
jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298

2 posted 2003-09-10 01:48 PM


do you read and comment on other's?  It makes a difference when you interact with the other poets.....this place is so busy that a poem can sink fast...

I think these are good *smile* keep writing

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