»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #28
»
Touching Me (Meg's Challenge)
| Open Poetry #28 |
|
Touching Me (Meg's Challenge) |
|
|
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
|
I crawl inside the warmth of your words I take them within my skin I make them a part of who I am Like an attentive lover You whisper of my needs You tell the story of my deeds You touch my face with spew of tongue And instinctively know Love not given the chance to grow You follow my body to bed Voice of caress as I close my eyes I feel the notes of your soul, nothing belies Softly sing the words of sooth Put my aching heart to sleep With song of silent weep |
||
| © Copyright 2003 Susan Caldwell - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good penning,, enjoyed the read,, |
||
|
gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
Dido? yes, very well put susan!  have you got her new album?!lovely, think I will put it on now!! Connie. xx |
||
|
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A stirring "song of silent weep". A lovely piece of poetic expression. Beautifully written, Dear Susan.  Linda |
||
|
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Q~Thank you you wonderful man you! Kiwi~OMG! It doesn't come out here until the 29th! But I have downloaded "White Flag" ....I am in love with Dido. Linda~thank you so much, you have to hear the song... "But I will go down with this ship I won't put my hands up in surrender There will be no white flag above my door I am in love and always will be" ~Dido, chorus to "White Flag" [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (09-09-2003 10:31 AM).] |
||
garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, I've got to hear that song.... I love this poem...it reads like a song.  Hugs Ethel |
||
|
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ethel~ Thank you what a compliment... You can go to yahoo then music, then to new videos, then to Dido and White Flag... It's beautiful... Susan |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Now I must find this song! Beautiful...just beautiful! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
||
|
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Nancy! |
||
|
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
All things are not easy to shake off!!! Haunting this was~ I also wanted to say I enjoyed your "Chapters" series, I read them all, just not in the order they were presented. You write really nice Susan~ |
||
|
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Simply beautiful, Susan...love this. Hugs, ~Vicky If you judge people, you have no time to love them. |
||
|
EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Wonderful read Susan. I enjoyed this. Thank-you ever so much for sharing it. |
||
|
Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Amazing, Susan.. I love it. |
||
|
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Bluesy~Thank you for reading all of it...  Vicky~Thank you! Evocative~Thank you! Haven't seen you before, welcome! Meg~No, no, thank you for setting the challenge.. Susan |
||
|
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Susan . . . challenge met beautifully reminds me of Hendrix: "music oh music, I wish I could caress, caress . . ." xxoo |
||
|
angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Tbis is well met.You've touched it and beyond. Crystal |
||
|
froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautiful Susan :-) Ribbit |
||
|
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
susan...i do so enjoy the way you write...helen |
||
|
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Sue~ohhhhhhh...Hendrix...got to love him...thank you for the compliment! Crystal~Thank you darrlink! Froggy~Thank you green one! Helen~As I do yours! Thank you! Susan |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
