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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
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0 posted 2003-09-09 03:24 AM


Love has left me cold,

Only my friend Darkness awaits me,

Pain has erupted ten-fold,

I am so lonely.

Where do I go now?

Rock bottom is fully booked.

As always it seems I am being overlooked.



Dark old days,

Days off old,

Old are the ways,

Ways of the Bold.



There is a dagger hanging over me,

Held by my partner in crime,

It was plain for all to see,

I wasn`t worth a dime.

Where do I go now?

Rock bottom is fully booked.

As always my dear I am being overlooked.



March with hope,

To the valley of love,

Bring your rope,

So we can catch THAT peace loving dove.



Force may well bring results,

With the prospect of new land,

The government says its worth all the insults,

Just keep your head in the sand.

Where do I go now?

Rock bottom is fully booked.

Why does my vote always get overlooked?



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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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1 posted 2003-09-09 04:44 AM


interesting write,,,

               

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-09-09 05:08 AM


pretty cool write...I see it that way too
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