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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2003-09-09 01:29 AM



+*+*+

Her very first car!
Thrill and pride of ownership!
Picked Mom up for spin!

Checked out dials and
Instruments on lit dashboard.
Awesome sound system!

Car fully loaded
With all the bells and whistles.
Grinning, toots own horn!

Mom's buttons bursting.
Daughter worked hard for success.
Car is just desserts!

+*+*+


[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-09-2003 01:39 AM).]

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-09-09 03:19 AM


oh gee, makes me wanna let mine drive real soon

lol

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-09-09 03:34 AM


oh my the first car,, I can still remember my first car it was a 19?? gee i'm haveing another senior moment,,  lol

nice senryu's,, lady poetess

           

MERCURY
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3 posted 2003-09-09 03:47 AM


Cars, eh, can`t live with them can`t live without em.
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-09-09 09:38 AM


passing shadows ~

Both of my daughters are better drivers than I am! As an "angel", I prefer to fly. lol

I feel quite confident when I am out with them--but the number of careless and dangerous drivers on the road is staggering--and that is veeeeery scary!!!


EA


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MERCURY ~

I know just what you mean!


EA

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6 posted 2003-09-09 09:40 AM


Q ~

Did it have a crank at the front? lol

Lovin' hugs 'n smilie faces,
EA

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7 posted 2003-09-09 03:36 PM




(smiles) Oh Linda, I am not much of a driver either, though I have my Ford Focus and license! (kiss on cheek) I wish I could fly, but instead I take the bus quite a lot, because I love hearing the stories around me that inspire some of my poetry, and I dream about becoming a successful singer and songwriting and getting to tour with people in a bus and just lay back and see the world! (big hugggsssssss) I guess driving by myself, though serene, can also feel too serene for me and a bit lonesome, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

angelblueyes
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8 posted 2003-09-09 03:39 PM


This is good. Look out world when my daughter hits the street.Shes MS.Dramaqueen in action.....lol I enjoyed this.
Crystal

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9 posted 2003-09-09 04:19 PM


Noah ~

Keep dreaming--and working towards your dreams--and they will become reality! Maybe now, maybe later--but I believe that with passion and persistence--and some talent thrown in for good measure--we can manifest those dreams into reality. I have seen it time and again in my own life--and I believe that we can make things happen.

Keep the faith--and the dreams!


Linda

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10 posted 2003-09-09 04:21 PM


angelblueyes ~

Does she get that from her mother? lol

Hugggums,
Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (09-09-2003 04:22 PM).]

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