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ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-09-09 12:46 PM


Once, in love
love shaking ground

Two beating hearts
hearts breaking sound

A beat was missed
missed a pound

Against the walls
the walls coming down

Now they stand
stand abound

Hear the ache
the ache it found?

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-09-09 12:48 PM


If walls could talk... oh the stories they would tell.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Kaoru
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2 posted 2003-09-09 12:48 PM


You got me thinking
   somehow..


sixREninenine
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3 posted 2003-09-09 12:50 PM


differnt..

i like it..

ctowen
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4 posted 2003-09-09 01:14 AM


SR - I thinks we share some of the same walls,
     or at least the pains which create them.

Meg - a mind is a terrible thing to waste ....
      but nowhere near a heart like yours.

6R - sometimes different clarifies the message
    
          Thank you all for your read.  *S

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-09-09 01:26 AM


yes
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In Your Poetic Mind
6 posted 2003-09-09 04:13 PM


I hear that echo.....hugssss you smile.....
ME~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

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