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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-09-08 07:17 PM


I listened
to your words
and understood them
in spanish

though I could not speak them
back, in your tongue
I knew without a
doubt

That the repeated
words
"El diablo"
next to my name


Was not a good thing

and without compulsion
I counted back from
deis
and arrived at
the soul meaning
of uno
the count of my
soul

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-09-08 07:40 PM


nice penning,,,

           

Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
2 posted 2003-09-08 08:19 PM


I failed spanish...

Jason

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2003-09-09 04:02 PM



Perhaps you failed Spanish
but you inherenty understood,
which is more than one class
in education...


Well done, Jason.

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
4 posted 2003-09-09 09:44 PM


Great writing as usual
from one 'diablo' to another

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
5 posted 2003-09-09 11:45 PM


Doesn't look like you failed to me.If anything you've exceeded the understanding.
Crystal

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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6 posted 2003-09-10 10:56 PM


Jason, this is awesome and had to grin here:

That the repeated
words
"El diablo"
next to my name


Was not a good thing

no, I dont think so . . .
lol
*smile*
xxoo

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