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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-08 04:37 PM



Rivers Dance


everything changes
the banks can not
be held back
by the beating
of the water
collected droplets swim
a different route
moved by these currents
of all that surrounds
prolonging it
only builds for
a bigger rush
of liquid flow
tumbling walls fall
washing away what was
forging new paths
leaving the earth moved
and ripples expressed
by a shiver

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
icebox
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
1 posted 2003-09-08 05:02 PM


It is true; existence is a fluid state.

*smile*

Kaoru
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since 2003-06-07
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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-09-08 05:47 PM


..sigh
beautiful.

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
3 posted 2003-09-08 06:19 PM


You are the river, nothing can hold you back helen, from beautiful things to come, and delivering us more beautiful words I hope.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
4 posted 2003-09-08 09:18 PM


never cease to amaze
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
5 posted 2003-09-08 09:50 PM


yes all from one source
beginning to end without separation

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