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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-09-08 03:46 PM



Tide-In-Turn
~*Marge Tindal*~

I would step aside
watching as the tide
rolls you gently away
Footstepping memories
may someday find us
on another shore
together~

Until that day comes
I'll starfishie-wishie
that the tide-in-turn
would bring you back
in quiet wash upon
my heart shore~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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1 posted 2003-09-08 04:36 PM


Some never leave our heartshores... no matter where their heads rest at night. *S*

This is absolutely beautiful, my friend.

vlraynes
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2 posted 2003-09-08 04:38 PM



Sometimes...
what appears
to have been swept away
is not so far away at all

Sometimes...
what's been washed from shore
is returned in the changing
of the tide

Sometimes...
at a closer glance from the heart
it can be found...laying silent
at your feet

And sometimes...
what was believed lost, is returned
stronger...and more beautiful
than before


Love you, Marge...


Every heart hath its own ache.
-Thomas Fuller

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-08-2003 05:17 PM).]

Martie
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3 posted 2003-09-08 05:09 PM


Marge/sis

Sometimes the tide brings back things more beautiful then when it took them.  

Patricia
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4 posted 2003-09-08 08:04 PM


Very lovely, Marge.  I love Martie's reply, as well.  Ladies, you made me smile this evening.  


Patricia

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5 posted 2003-09-08 08:10 PM


A haunting, beautiful echo of tide.

I hope someday, that someone I love, comes back to me also.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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6 posted 2003-09-08 08:22 PM


I have my love with me and am so thankful and grateful.

Marge, dear friend, whoever you want back I hope will come to you one day with open arms and a huge smile.

A wonderful piece and I love the graphic. You know I snagged it!  

Love ya, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

Nan
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7 posted 2003-09-08 08:36 PM


Sometimes the tide merely washes sand over the starfish and they simply appear to have been swept away... when all the while they were snuggled safely upon the beach beside us...
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8 posted 2003-09-08 10:19 PM


Dear Marge:  Your poetry is as fascinating as the sea and tides themselves!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 2003-09-08 10:25 PM


oh if not for that ebb and flow, we would truly sink into oblivion
Bill Charles
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10 posted 2003-09-08 10:26 PM


Marge - what can I say I haven't said already. You're just gooder...

BC

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11 posted 2003-09-19 08:22 AM


I really like this Marge. Your talent is never ending.
Love,
Betty

Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2003-09-22 08:25 AM


Thank you all so much~

As gentle as the tide swell ... the friendship that leaves footprints all over our hearts, keeps us returning to the shore~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

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13 posted 2003-09-22 11:50 AM


Some remain with us forevermore, even if only in memory.
Crystal

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14 posted 2003-09-23 03:34 AM


sigh
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