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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2003-09-08 03:59 AM


Heed this warning,

From the mouth of madness,

That Earth shall plummet,

To the lonely forgotten depths of past ages.

Woe to the people,

Who have not lived their life.

Pity those who have not feasted on the banquet.

As time calls last orders,

Rueful memories drift past,

Why are we frustrated?

Bound to the enemies within.

Last chance saloon is packed with the flock,

Expressions of sorrow etched like rock.

One scented soft breath is all that’s required,

Life is for living – NOW.



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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2003-09-08 04:03 AM


very uplifting! thanks
jbsoria
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since 2003-09-03
Posts 26
Phoenix, Arizona
2 posted 2003-09-08 04:04 AM


Well, ok.  Although I feel the inspiration welling up inside me, I can't get over the sense of impending doom.  Nice write, though!
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
3 posted 2003-09-08 04:11 AM


very good,,,

           

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
4 posted 2003-09-08 06:59 PM


yes!!!!

very much enjoyed

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