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Open Poetry #28

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Lotus Breeze
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since 2003-09-06

Posts 112

0 posted 2003-09-07 07:22 AM

I turn eyes to ground
Not see you to smile or frown,
The raindrops fall down
Watch tears water dry flower
Shyness takes looking power.

When looking once more
Your walk takes beyond looking
Shyness brought sadness

I turn eyes to sky
I Not know my shyness why
I not know the cry
That made me water flower
When in the shyness power

When looking next time
Will I show you my tearless face
Or water flowers

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-09-07 08:07 AM

Looking inward
will always inspire
such poetry.

Thank you, Lotus Breeze

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-09-07 09:08 AM

If tears must fall, may they water the flowers in a garden of beautiful new dreams that will become your reality.

A gentle, graceful--and very poetic--piece of writing.