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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-09-06 10:34 PM


funny how at the instant
you delivered truth
third class
I closed my eyes
and hoped for lies
sent
fed ex

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-09-06 10:55 PM


EXCELLENT!!

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   I still have sand in my shoes ~

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-09-07 03:05 AM


ugh..punch to the stomache..
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-09-07 04:08 AM


owie
vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
4 posted 2003-09-07 04:20 AM



Ouch...a kick in the gut, indeed.
Hugs to you,
~Vicky

If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

DarkIce
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since 2003-09-06
Posts 5

5 posted 2003-09-07 04:43 AM


Dude
well it was short and kinda sweet

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
6 posted 2003-09-07 09:13 AM


Mann Jason, this is damn good writing
and yes
*holding eye from punch here, yet again*
I have an awful lot of black eyes from you
lol
*smile*
xxoo

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7 posted 2003-09-07 12:00 PM


Ah, yes...."what can Brown do for you?"

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