My floor, a mess, with beauty

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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-09-06 12:53 PM

The floor
upon which
I stand
is littered

crumpled ink
pages
may look
like
waste

but
are
my gold
saviour
wisps

dog eared
wrinkled
reflection
of ageing

soul

recycle
each moment
stilled
upon white

recite
with sound
and silence
in mind
.
.
.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2003-09-06 01:02 PM

LOL, I love that kind of messy floor!
AND THAT PHOTO! WOO HOO!

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2003-09-06 01:09 PM

And I woke up this morning thinking I should clean up all this paper. Now I'm not going to! I shall view it as the best room in the house, thanks! ~K~

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-09-06 02:38 PM

you can make anything work Gem. And because of your constant whineing, I upgrade you to a brat. heh..I'd post one but I'm not kidding. There is this one voice in my brain that tells me that you will stop reading if I post evey day. bah..I barely even post evey week anymore. but I love you..you write so much that I always have something new to read when I am bored. is that how you wish I was? lol

and yes you are a mess

insanity is not a crime

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-09-06 02:52 PM

Awesome gem, and next time you post a pic without telling me i'm going to kick yer @rse!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-09-06 03:11 PM

soul

recycle
each moment
stilled
upon white

recite
with sound
and silence
in mind

Hey Gemma

I love this and I'm keeeeeeeepiiiing it!!
Hugs and love, little friend

Ethel

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2003-09-06 04:08 PM

Wow...

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

7 posted 2003-09-06 04:36 PM

very very cool write.I'm keepin it.

Jason

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-09-06 06:46 PM

(sigh) Call me crazy, but I believe the cleanest house never feels like home! I believe each room has ton have some mess to it, because then you know that is your mess, and you're surrounded with character...fascination...impression! (big hugggssssssss) This is a wonderful poem, sweet friend, always feel free to take a day off and let the floor be, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

9 posted 2003-09-06 07:20 PM

Yes! Some messes are treasures!
Truly enjoyed this write!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

[This message has been edited by JilGirl (09-06-2003 07:21 PM).]

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