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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-09-08 12:15 PM



Hard quiet beauty,
cold wind in your face,
watching the waves
with your back to me and the sun;

seeing you
I feel closer to god
her waves and her wind;
I want to reach out
to touch you,
just to say hello.

©2003 by icebox

© Copyright 2003 icebox - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-09-08 12:17 PM


I like the way you show the beginning of one season and the end of another.Well penned.
Crystal

Martie
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California
2 posted 2003-09-08 12:27 PM


icebox

I was at the ocean today...the waves and a warm wind in my face, so I guess it wasn't me, but hello anyway.  

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-09-08 01:07 AM


icebox





EA

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-09-08 02:37 AM


*echoing hello*
Nan
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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
5 posted 2003-09-08 07:35 AM


And a Hello from the great Atlantic - Just a bit northerly though - where glorious autumn hues shall soon grace our shores...
gemjop
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Pencilveinia, USA
6 posted 2003-09-08 07:51 AM





Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2003-09-08 08:23 AM


And...hello from the Great Lakes!
Still a warm breeze here...
but soon...change is in the air.
~Morning hugs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

Susan Caldwell
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Florida
8 posted 2003-09-08 08:43 AM


"seeing you
I feel closer to god"

Hmmm..love that line.

I would never have my back to you...

Susan

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