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DarkIce
New Member

since 2003-09-06

Posts 5

0 posted 2003-09-06 09:28 AM

Open your eyes

The crocked Street lamps
The winding roads
Hide guilty faces
as the darkness grows

The rush of lights
The deafning sound
The night takes away it's victim
as everything falls to the ground

Sirens cry out to me
flashing lights lead the way
to something unforgiving
which takes my breath away

Now here in your room
here you lay beside me
Your so pale so cold
Why did this haveto be

Just open your eyes
Take my pain from here
hold me in your arms again
wipe away my tears

Tell me it'll be okay
That you'll be coming home
Don't leave me now
I don't wanna be alone

It's not meant to end like this
Not now not tonite
So come back to me
Please
Just open your eyes

Dark Ice

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-06 10:21 AM

you expressed feelings well, good write.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-09-06 10:34 AM

How very sad, yet such a tender write.
Welcome, DarkIce, to Pips.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-09-06 03:03 PM

welcome, a very good first write. I enjoyed the desperation you put into this and hope you stick around. we are a great family

yeah..um this reminds me of this song...and..um yeah.. really good

insanity is not a crime

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-09-06 03:14 PM

very nice entrance welcome to pip

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

5 posted 2003-09-06 03:25 PM

Welcome to Passions

a sad opening, but well expressed, good write keep it up

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (09-06-2003 03:26 PM).]

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

6 posted 2003-09-06 04:01 PM

A delicate subject
handled especially well.
WELCOME TO PIP!
You've made a fine entrance
with this write!

Blessings!
Shirl

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2003-09-06 05:41 PM

(big hugggssssssss) This is a very sad but beautiful debut, sweet friend, I too pray that the senses will come in and through the whole odeal relief will be found, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your heartfelt poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-09-06 06:58 PM

Welcome to Passions! Please,
check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

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