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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-09-06 05:58 AM



An Open Book I Maintain

I am an open book
Emotions plain to see
Poured onto pages
Introspections of me

Read me at leisure
Remember the tissues
Emotions have spilt
On touchy little issues

I wander and ponder
From ramblings inside
Going step by step
The occasional stride

Upon life's blessings
Of challenges realised
Unloading  baggage
Emotions emphasised

Wishing well of hope
Dipping thoughts again
In quiet introspection
An open book I maintain

HopeĀ©2003

© Copyright 2003 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-09-06 09:00 AM


HopeS
Aren't we all. well done.

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2003-09-06 09:08 AM


Enjoyed!

Susan

SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-09-06 09:15 AM


Lovely as always. Just loved this!
With a little as a matter-of-factly touch to it. Cute, yet serious, too. WOW how did you do that?

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

gemjop
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4 posted 2003-09-06 09:36 AM


And we wouldn't want you any other way.

Some people let their emotions be seen, and are honest with them too, and those kind of people are worth more than gold.



into my library, friend.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

HopeS
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5 posted 2003-09-06 10:20 AM


thank you Sy , yes it must be a poet thing
ages of pages

Hope

HopeS
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6 posted 2003-09-06 10:22 AM


thank you Sue , I am pleased you enjoyed your reply is  appreciated
Hope

HopeS
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7 posted 2003-09-06 10:24 AM


Thank you for your reply Shara, I guess thats the way emotions flow , sometimes they are dark other times they glow

Hope

HopeS
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8 posted 2003-09-06 10:27 AM


thank you Gem , your kind reply was to treasure ... it was rather late in life that I began writing... so until then I guess my emotions were hidden , now through poetry I allow everyone to see the emotional me !!!

Hope

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