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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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pointless to ask what you won’t tell why but please can we just talk |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Probably not. I like the simplicity of this plaintive little poem, but I have to say the prognosis is not good.  Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
.....snif..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sure! ~and a hug~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How many misunderstandings would be resolved much faster if the whats and whys were just explained instead of letting silence speak the displeasure. *S* Excellent write, my friend... one of these days, you're gonna have to teach me how to make such a powerful statement in so few words! *S* |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yup let's talk... I love to talk and talk and talk  Wonderful Ed, so much said. Maree |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I've asked this so many times... Something from you I can relate to. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
How do things get solved if people don't talk them out??? Makes no sense to me. :? SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahh yes . . . I do know this Ed  xxoo |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
I can relate to your words...been held in the grip of silence once too often. Excellent write. So much said with so few words. Patricia |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed...talk to me...I'm better at listening. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Better at listening! Your worth is beyond rubies.......... Actually I wrote this as a result of playing with words, just balancing and building, practicing poetry -- not because of anything that's going on in my life. It seemed good to me, so I put it up.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ed, it IS good!! You thought right!! I think I'm going to study you along with Local Rebel on your poetry with few words. Both of you say so much in such few words. I want to learn to do that! Thanks for the lesson.  Hugs Ethel |
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