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jbsoria
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0 posted 2003-09-05 06:52 AM



Worlds Apart?

Can sleep even come in this mindful state?
The stronger the desire, the longer the wait.
As billions of eyes look down and smile,
The only two on my mind are closed all the while.
I pray in her dreams is where I will be.
I pray that she's sleeping; dreaming of me.

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Nan
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1 posted 2003-09-05 07:54 AM


The world isn't nearly as expansive as it once was, jbsoria - Anything's possible...
SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-09-05 08:59 AM


Awww this is sweet!!! Lovely words for the one that has captured your heart;


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Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-09-07 03:13 PM


This is really pretty. I'm glad
that I found it today.
Hugs  
Ethel

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
4 posted 2003-09-07 03:16 PM



Or perhaps not so far apart after all?
This is beautiful, jbsoria.
Hugs,
~Vicky

If you judge people, you have no time to love them.
--Mother Teresa

angelblueyes
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5 posted 2003-09-07 07:04 PM


This is sweet, perhaps she is.
Crystal

jbsoria
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6 posted 2003-09-08 03:19 AM


Thank you all for your kind words.  She IS very sweet.  Wish me luck!
gemjop
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7 posted 2003-09-08 06:38 PM


Cute! Good luck! I hope she is!
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