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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2003-09-04 09:37 PM

to the Capt

I tried to tiptoe
quietly...
unseen
unheard
unobtrusively

enjoying the feel

vicariously

wishing
to stroll
within
a dream state
so familiar

I mistook it
for my own.

Then it happened.

Before I was ready
I awoke.

POOF.

Easy come
easy go.

I'm tired of my dream sequence.

May I step into yours
for one night?

inspired by our Capt, and his 'Unconscious Steps' /pip/Forum81/HTML/002234.html

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (09-04-2003 10:08 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-09-05 06:44 AM

He does have a way
of slipping in
those poems,
doesn't he?

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2003-09-05 09:39 AM

It's not hard to mistake a universal memory for ones own...

Take this one for example

Ed...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-09-05 09:44 AM

Midnitesun
Why not there are universal dreams.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-09-05 11:56 AM

He does have a way, does'nt he.Excellentlly penned.

Crystal

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2003-09-05 11:58 AM

I like this very much... *S*

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

6 posted 2003-09-05 12:21 PM

"Where lovers find only true happiness
meet me somewhere in my dreams"..old folk song.
If we could only understand the process of our dreams, we might understand ourselves.
Well done. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

7 posted 2003-09-05 12:25 PM

Sweetie...if you step into my dream for a night....I'd be in big trouble.....you'd get pregnant, I'd be stuck with child support, you could do all kinds of things for me and I would try to do the same for you?....In fact, after just reading this...you may be making love to me all night anyhow?....(I know...in my dreams).....lovely write gal...

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2003-09-05 02:23 PM

Glad you guys and gals enjoyed my dream state.

Toe? oh my, I never had any idea you had such wild dreams! LOL, you just might make me

some day.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

9 posted 2003-09-05 05:44 PM

Midnitesun - it would be nice to step into another's dream...

BC

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-09-05 06:33 PM

Kacy . . . what a beautiful reply
as a duet . . .
is lovely . . . truly
xxoo

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2003-09-05 07:15 PM

Lovely reply to the Captain's post Kacy!
Very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes ~

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