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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2003-09-04 08:41 PM



How many ways
Have I conveyed
My love for you?

How many rhymes
Or number of times
Have I shown I care?

How many seasons
Or expert reasons
Before you have
A clue?

That nothing has changed
For I'm still the same
And your love is
Where?

I'd built the bridges
On rickety ridges
To somehow get to you

Risked my way of life
Lost days and nights
Hoping you would believe

On long silent stretches
My heart filled with guesses
One thing remained true

If you were here
All things would be clear
In this haze where I grieve

So tell me,

How many ways
Have I conveyed
My love for you?

How many rhymes
Or number of times
Have I shown I care?

How many seasons
Or expert reasons
Before you have
A clue?

That nothing has changed
For I'm still the same
But your love is...

Where?


~Tier


[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (09-04-2003 08:42 PM).]

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-09-04 08:44 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh R.T, I am so sorry to hear of your heartache, sweet friend, I know just how you feel because I always told Joanna how much I loved her and she used to love me then on New Years Day she said she never loved me and gave me the cold shoulder! (sad sigh) I stressed how much I loved her thousands of times, yet it still got nowhere! (sigh) I send angel hugs out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet R.T, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-04-2003 08:45 PM).]

Tiersdin
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2 posted 2003-09-04 08:54 PM


*Soft hugs* Back to you, Noah. I'm so sorry that you too have had your heart broken.  I'm sure that someone will see and appreciate as we all do, the beauty that shines brightly inside of you...

Thank you for reading and commenting from the heart!



~Tier

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3 posted 2003-09-04 10:14 PM



It hurts when the one you love seems to walk with their eyes and hearts closed.
A tender poignant write, dear Tier.

wranx
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4 posted 2003-09-05 09:50 AM


It's a song Tiersdin

one that could be sung in a smoky, blue-lit cellar bar.

angelblueyes
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5 posted 2003-09-05 11:52 AM


This brought to my eyes.It's out of reach and feels so painful.hmmmm
Crystal

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