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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-09-04 08:00 PM



And Like The Seasons
~*Marge Tindal*~

Like the seasons, I have changed
Found my heart in rearrange
Falling memories contain
Thoughts of you still~

Leafing through the fallen remains
Finding some things will never change
Fingering loving gifts exchanged
I weep against my will~

Mist still rises from these loving eyes
Burning shamed bridges of realize
Never again will we share sighs
Of Spring in unison on the hill~

I will still love you foreverly
Just because I can~



*Just a little doo-wop*


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (09-05-2003 12:16 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-09-04 08:02 PM


Lovely Marge...simply lovely.
~Hugs~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
  I still have the sand in my shoes ~

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2 posted 2003-09-04 09:16 PM


Ah, lady... when someone touches us deeply enough, we carry a part of them forever... they may not be in sight any more than dogwood blossoms are in mid winter... but they'll be in our hearts... held safely for remembering. *S* Beautiful! *S*
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3 posted 2003-09-04 09:49 PM


Dear Marge: Enjoyed this poignant write, very much!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2003-09-05 06:28 AM


Amazing how some things change and some things never will
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5 posted 2003-09-05 09:10 AM


--and you do doo-wop sooo well!


EA

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6 posted 2003-09-05 09:28 AM


I will still love you foreverly
Just because I can~



Marge, I love this.  
Hugs  
Ethel


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7 posted 2003-09-05 12:13 PM



Marge...even through the lonely ache that
I feel from this one, it is beautiful

Yes...those who are truly in our hearts,
we will love forever...because we can.

Hugs to you,
~Vicky

"Deep inside this armor, the warrior is a child."
~Twila Paris

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8 posted 2003-09-05 12:16 PM


The sadness tugged at my heartstrings, but the beuaty was amazement to my eyes.For everything you touch in body, mind, and spirit has such wondrous beauty in itself.
Crystal

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9 posted 2003-09-05 05:45 PM


Marge - whew, very expressive thoughts you write...

BC

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10 posted 2003-09-06 03:05 AM


So very beautiful Marge.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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11 posted 2003-09-06 12:08 PM




simple as that.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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12 posted 2003-09-06 12:36 PM


oh Marge...*tears stream gently*...this is melancholic, or maybe it's just my  mood...but so sweet. Thank you.
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