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symphony_of_thoughts
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since 2003-08-03
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Somewhere

0 posted 2003-09-04 05:54 PM



Life hangs on the edge
Near to dangling
Waving quietly in the wind
It speaks in a soft tone

Sure you've made your share of mistakes
But who in their life hasn't
You don't need this towards your end
Cherish a gift and look forward

Life tells to be ware
It tells to cherish
Every waking moment, Don't regret
Reach ahead and forget

Sure it's passed by
In a heartbeat's tic
Good moments were there
And if not, there sure to come

Forget the regret
Plagued in your old age
It's a burden on your hands
It's gone and done, so leave it

Leave it beyond
So it can drift away
And be forgetton
Without a single touch

Be happy to be alive
And when you finally reach
The end of the tunnel
Don't walk back, stand firm

Life hangs on the edge
Near to dangling
Waving quietly in the wind
It speaks in a soft tone



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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-09-05 11:56 PM


Oh yes!!!
Your soft tone speaks volumes!

Thank you for this, symphony~

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-09-06 09:51 AM


Beautiful.
Eric

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-09-06 09:54 AM


So filled with hope! Nice.

SharaRose @-->--


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-06-2003 09:56 AM).]

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