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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-09-04 04:35 PM


~*~  ~*~

Of a gaze into your eyes the sight consumes me
Every course uncharted, wakes and quivers newly
Taking over all my senses autopilot
Lit in emerald shimmered sighs and pulses violet

While my eyes take on another soft percussion
In a voice that barely trembles this discussion
And your touch, it travels upward in a fine spray
Bringing quench to secret gardens misted hearsay

As exposed you seem to blossom then close inward
Stepping back, and coming forth renewed in dreams stirred
An inaudible conclusion that my heart hears
Standing taller and responding as the melt clears

While beside you all the time it takes to mellow
Hardy breeds of pleasant seeds kept warm in yellow
To become a dance of one, as we seem destined
For my lips seem searching of a rose to rest in

Every glimpse into your summer leaves me quickened
In the autumn of your meadow, fields thickened
Warmed in pleasures of the winter by your fire
Feeling full eternally with spring’s desire

Copyright Kkh 9/4/03

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (09-04-2003 04:36 PM).]

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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1 posted 2003-09-04 04:56 PM


what a wonderful penning lady poetress,,,

            


symphony_of_thoughts
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since 2003-08-03
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2 posted 2003-09-04 06:10 PM


The imagery you convey is very breathtaking to think about.  I particularly liked the metaphors on seasons.  I might not be able to relate to the subject of this poem, but I sure thought the feeling, emotion, imagery, and metaphors were very good and if I could relate, I could appreciate it to another level.

[This message has been edited by symphony_of_thoughts (09-04-2003 06:10 PM).]

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