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Suede
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since 2003-08-25
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Drifting on the soul

0 posted 2003-09-04 02:26 PM


Reflections by the waters edge tell the truth
Like the calm after the storm
The arrival of spring with the scent it brings
The softness of your lips, to touch, to kiss
The rains, after months of being lost, finally pour
How i dream of you in perfection each night
The way i drown in your eyes, never to be saved
Like a new born baby, pure, the essence of life
One word, just simplicity in view
Beautiful

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bslicker
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1 posted 2003-09-04 03:44 PM


"Reflections by the waters edge tell the truth
Like the calm after the storm"


"Like a new born baby, pure, the essence of life
One word, just simplicity in view
Beautiful


This beautiful writing besides the title
Bernie

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Bernie Slicker

Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast
2 posted 2003-09-04 08:45 PM


I'm glad I had a chance to read this.

Beautiful...

*smiles*
~Tier

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-09-04 08:59 PM


Simply beautiful!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
  I still have the sand in my shoes ~

DarlingDeb
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4 posted 2003-09-04 09:44 PM


Very beautiful indeed! A true romantic! I am new here at Passions, but love all of the romantic poems so much! Thank you for the beautiful write!

Deb

Everyone has a "Special Angel" watching over them each day!

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