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Open Poetry #28

A Celebration Of Life

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2003-09-04 10:45 AM

Flowers dancing in the wind,
Their beautiful dresses flowing,
A celebration of life
And of everything growing!

Let us humans join the dance,
Our creativity employ
A celebration of life,
Our hearts bubbling with joy!

Take on life as a challenge,
Live it with a smile on your face,
A celebration of life,
Hanging on God’s loving grace…

Here we are, friends forever,
Together in love we will grow,
A celebration of life
And the truth we’ve come to know.

GhostWriter_6
Member

since 2001-09-03

Posts 237
??Amityville??

1 posted 2003-09-04 10:48 AM

very nyce post.. very well written and had a nyce flow with the rhyme scheme you used... keep it up playa.....

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-09-04 11:02 AM

Ben, I applaud you on this "Celebration of Life"! I thoroughly enjoyed it and was continually smiling as I read it!

Linda

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-09-04 11:17 AM

Here we are, friends forever,
Together in love we will grow,
A celebration of life
And the truth we’ve come to know.

Ben, this is so very beautiful and peaceful.
It sure did make me smile, too. Thank you!!

Hugs

Ethel

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2003-09-04 11:17 AM

Ghost Writer,

Thanks... I know I have trouble with rhythm sometimes, so I'm glad this one was good.

Linda,

This was partly inspired by you, actually, so I'm glad you enjoyed it!

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

5 posted 2003-09-04 11:18 AM

Ethel,

Thank you. I'm glad it brought you a smile.

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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