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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2003-09-04 09:36 AM


greener tables
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there lies the table of green
only one more shot
caressing the stick
through the fingers
staring down the tip
where only one
language be used
english
then the shot
balls were rushing
to the hole
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k
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p
l
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n
k
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the eight ball sunk !!!!


bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-09-04 09:47 AM


bslicker
Enjoyed the read. LOL

GhostWriter_6
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2 posted 2003-09-04 09:48 AM


nyce piece you dropped B... the whole metaphorical reference to the pool tables was nyce.. keep it up....
bslicker
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3 posted 2003-09-04 10:42 AM


yes was at a pool league tourney at cocoa beach over the labor day weekend with the moose lodge. and our valley league starts this coming monday, was just a thought i wrote that made me smile

Seymour Tabin & Ghost Writer
thanks for reading


bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (09-04-2003 10:43 AM).]

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