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Bonfirelight
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-09-04 05:26 AM


Sunset evades the low bridges
Ravens bring the rain
The angels head for higher ground
to take refuge in
Gods remains.

free flowing, the river runs
deeper than hell
pictured by priests
carrying with it the swell of division
our peoples hopes
our dreams and peace

But the dam stands firm where we understand
and becomes faiths last refuge
mans last stand

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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-09-04 05:28 AM


your thoughts are expressed well,,,enjoyed the read..

            


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