Open Poetry #28 |
Atlantic Ocean’s Waves of Love |
bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Atlantic Ocean’s Waves of Love . . . laying upon the Atlantic crashing waves covering our bodies beach sand moving with tides direction stars glistening our love though the darkness showing the crest of waves not a care of others for we were one in thought no-one else there upon the other edge of the world miles away wondering if another couple was looking over oceans way with a ditto imaging thoughts Atlantic’s magical touch oop’s honey !!! there are others on the beach !!!! . . . Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (09-04-2003 08:54 AM).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, this is great....especially the ending! Too many people have the same thing in mind, eh?? I like the idea of another couple across the ocean mirroring the scene...what a great write! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
thanks Sunny One Yep Labor Day 2003 weekend at Cocoa Beach Florida Was a great weekend bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very romantic penning,, enjoyed the read,,, |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I bet there are no others anywhere on the whole Atlantic seaboard... This is kewl, Bernie... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
now, this is the place I am everyday of my life, thank you my friend for this vision of paradise..your a lucky fella.... |
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DarlingDeb New Member
since 2003-08-28
Posts 9Harriman, Tn |
Romance is not dead!!!! More people need to realize this and take advantage of living in paradise! Deb Everyone has a "Special Angel" watching over them each day! |
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