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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-09-04 12:56 PM



Photo From Webshots
~*~*~
The stars are shining
brightly in the velvet skies
whispering softly

Walking hand in hand
by the soft light of the moon
on the beach at night

With feet in the sand
we lie down on the blanket
while watching the stars

While we watch the stars
we dream and talk of our lives
hearing the soft waves

Planning our future
lying under sparkling stars
in black velvet skies

Lying side by side
on the white sand of the beach
we spoke of our dreams

We were there all night
with sun rising o'er water
the daybreak came forth

Sun shining brightly
with reflections of color
on clear blue waters

The suns rays shine forth
sending down feelings of warmth
on to the white sands

Sea shells on the sand
with the sound clearly inside
whispering softly

Softly in our ears
we hear sweet sounds of our dreams
and plans we have made
~*~*~





© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
kayjay
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1 posted 2003-09-04 01:02 AM


Your thoughts seem as a gushing well of feeligns for your man, and I love the way you phrase them.  (And yes, I'm doing well...thx *S* I've been in Minnesota painting my sister's house.)

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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2 posted 2003-09-04 01:06 AM


You have a wealth of love between the two of you....what a wonderful commodity...it's a fountain that never runs dry...watering the rest of our hearts with hope!!!!! for you two to share.


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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3 posted 2003-09-04 01:52 AM


gosh ethel
what pretty color to paint with love


bernie

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4 posted 2003-09-04 01:58 AM


This is so very soft, and like a velvet blanket that love has woven for us to curl up in!  Thank you for showing us how beautiful love can truly be when shared!!! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

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5 posted 2003-09-04 04:10 AM


soft and beautiful
Iyad

"Hallow the body as a temple to comeliness and sanctify the heart as a sacrifice to love; love recompenses the adorers."
Khalil Gibran


MERCURY
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6 posted 2003-09-04 04:18 AM


Super poem
QjQ
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7 posted 2003-09-04 05:33 AM


Romantic dreams under the stars how lovely,,

            


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8 posted 2003-09-04 07:37 AM


beautiful worded images Ethel ,  the way you portrayed the love felt was wonderful
Hope

LeeJ
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9 posted 2003-09-04 08:15 AM


good monring pretty poetess...how lovely the colors of your mind, the warmth of your smile and the songs in your heart.  
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10 posted 2003-09-04 08:16 AM


I can think of no better plan than to bask under that sky... and share... How very nice, Ethel...
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-09-04 08:21 AM


Ethel,
I always keep a sea shell nearby to listen to. Enjoyed

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