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IndigoEve
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since 2003-01-10
Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

0 posted 2003-09-03 09:49 PM


trees sway and
shed golden leaves 'round me
the paradox of someone's
gentle dreaming
falling
alone

into the hands of time

tracing the perfect vision of
me
and you
but you were never there

through always loving lucid blues
finding lilacs
to sprinkle
on wrinkled paper,
and scented with perfume
my words
make it exquisite

poetess
looking longingly to firmaments untold
inhaling
the cerulean
seeping through my pen
black trimmed in invisible beauty

how did you kiss me..
I find illusion so refined

stained with memories
of idealism
dancing 'cross the fields

voice like silken thread
comes undone
as each note weaves a precious lullaby
fragrant lady
singing
to her baby in the high, high grass

one strange song
intended for me

by you
unwove

our swing stopped swaying delicately
so many ages ago
abandoned for lonely meadows
of rhythmic inspiration

but as it loses its faint momentum
does it slow?
does it fade
away
into eternity..

or does it,
like you and I
ever so softly remain?

For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet"

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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-09-03 09:52 PM


This is absolutely beautiful and wonderful.I enjoyed the smoothness and insght to this.
Crystal

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-09-04 09:42 PM


Oh my...this is breath-taking. This was like as if it were spken softly. Very nice.


SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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