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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2003-09-03 09:20 PM


~*~


Was, the dubious companion of is
In flecks of brilliance sifted all of this
As close as I can tell emotions well
We are but the circles quiet of compel

Begun in greening summer first and down
And my heart felt sun again in July’s crown
In whispers that cascade the season as it turns
We are but the circles quiet fever burns

She, a teacher’s torture to your spirit blue
Whipping every freedom from the wings of you
He, a cold and shallow man of frost and ice
We are but the circles spinning once or twice

Moving through the autumn miles a snail’s pace
In the flight of lovers destined to embrace
Close, to wander through the savage winter winds
We are but the circles as the wheel spins

Finally the moment in it’s afterglow
In the flecks of brilliance we have come to know
Something far more sacred than a lover’s sigh
We are but the circles endless eye to eye

This the season turning with it’s volume up
You, full bodied wine that fills my endless cup
Sure of what could be yet walking silently
We are but the circles on a gentle see

Copyright Kkh 9/3/03


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-09-03 09:22 PM


I love this.Absolutely breathtaking.
Crystal

QjQ
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2 posted 2003-09-03 09:33 PM


nicely expressed,,,

         


Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-09-03 09:43 PM



...Exquisite!!...

      ~ Summer can't be over...
  I still have the sand in my shoes ~

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just out of reach
4 posted 2003-09-03 09:55 PM




WOW !!!
HUGS FOR THIS BEAUTY !!
Chris

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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5 posted 2003-09-03 10:34 PM


so timely all of this
in more ways than one

Moving through the autumn miles a snail’s pace
In the flight of lovers destined to embrace
Close, to wander through the savage winter winds
We are but the circles as the wheel spins

caught up in it, whether or not we want to be, sad but comforting too

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-09-03 11:06 PM


"Begun in greening summer first and down
And my heart felt sun again in July’s crown
In whispers that cascade the season as it turns
We are but the circles quiet fever burns"

~ I absolutely adore these lines!

A lovely poem of seasons in transition!

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

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