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vandana
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0 posted 2003-09-03 05:26 PM



Someone can be
In my mind
If I can bring the person to me
I will be lost
When you touch
I would be in heaven
With you
forever
I won't get lost
unless you decide to be with me
Memories can bring back
Those days of love
which we used to
share together
Memories are coming back to me
It is all coming back to me
It is hurting me
I can feelthe heart beating fast
When I hear your song
on the radio
everyday
It brings back to my mind
All the things
you used to say
I can hear your voice calling
As the wind blows
I took deep breathe
And It brought me back
those days of love
we used to say
Memories....

[This message has been edited by vandana (09-03-2003 05:27 PM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-09-03 05:59 PM


vandana
Well done, enjoyed the read.

angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-09-03 07:38 PM


memories can give us that happiness instead of just sadness.You've penned that well here.Loved the form of this.
Crystal

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3 posted 2003-09-05 11:15 PM




(sigh) Oh Vandana, I have missed your gorgeous words so much, sweet friend, always cherish those memories you hold to heart and try to forget about the tears that followed, God Bless You, here's angel friendship hugs for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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4 posted 2003-09-05 11:23 PM


*Sad sigh*...very well written Vandana!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

      ~ Summer can't be over...
   I still have sand in my shoes ~

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5 posted 2003-09-06 01:09 AM


vandana~ you are a poetess after my own heart!

This reminds me of one of my many theme songs...

And if you read between the lines, you'll know that I'm just trying to understand, the feelings that you have...and you won't read that book again because the ending's just too hard to take~


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6 posted 2003-09-06 01:45 AM


This is so very bittersweet... ~K~
QjQ
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7 posted 2003-09-06 02:49 AM


thoughts expressed well,,,,

                


Kethry
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8 posted 2003-09-06 02:55 AM


Ah memories - you bring them to life.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-09-06 08:54 PM


May your heart be filled with good memories...James
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10 posted 2003-09-06 09:11 PM


There is a lovely song
"Memories",
and it holds as much to it
as does your poem.

Very, very nice, Vandana.

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11 posted 2003-09-06 09:16 PM


Wishing you showers of gentle, soft memory moments, my friend.
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12 posted 2003-09-06 09:46 PM


Vandana, I hope that your memories will be
filled with very good thoughts.  
Hugs to you, my friend  
Ethel

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13 posted 2003-09-07 10:34 AM


Sweetly conceived and beautifully said. I hope it reaches the heart of the one for whom it was written.

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