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To The Heart |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Can you see past the river where the torn ground spits out the sound that eases doubt, and tremble of leaves is only fear, and perhaps deer, a place unnamed where one sits and talks to the start? It would appear that no one is here to listen to heart that fills up each day with high octane and roars around the glitter pushing aside the chaos until there is road that takes the lonely away from day. The banter of lips are torn from touching heat so often, until blistered they part and drink from this place where beginning is so cool and the wash of life catches a callus that came from too much fool. Too much filling up and letting out and filling again rubbed in and all that is left is to be here taking a breath and maybe asking a question and listening as the sky quiets and the trees stop tremble, to the heart. ----------- 4-6-02.......repost for a special friend. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And now everyone is hoping they are that special friend. Thanks for the repost, Sis... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dear Martie...Once again I find myself holding my breath as I read down the blue page. Beautiful writing...just beautiful... Your friend is fortunate indeed. ~Hugs~ ~ Summer can't be over... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ This is so very special ... thank you for sharing it's beauty with us all~  *Huglets*  ~*Me*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh my...Martie...you KNOW I feel this one... "It would appear that no one is here to listen to heart that fills up each day with high octane and roars around the glitter pushing aside the chaos until there is road that takes the lonely away from day." This reached in and grabbed my heart...I know this one... So glad you reposted it. Love and hugs, my friend.. "Deep inside this armor, the warrior is a child." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - how wonderfully you write - how precious are your words - loved this as always - Paul |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The heart is so hard to hear...... but you're right, as always. And beautifully so in this one. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is really wonderful, and so glad that you decided to repost it!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Too much filling up and letting out and filling again rubbed in and all that is left is to be here taking a breath and maybe asking a question and listening as the sky quiets and the trees stop tremble, to the heart. Oh, Martie, you are such a dear sweet person. Anyone would be very blessed to have such a friend as you are. Thank you so very much for reposting this and sharing it with all of us here. You are an Angel. Hugs from my heart to you, sweet Martie Ethel |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Martie, this is beautiful and inspirational.Your writes always take my breath away.Nicely poenned  Crystal |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
You've a lucky friend, I can see that. And read it. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
all that is left is to be here taking a breath and maybe asking a question and listening as the sky quiets and the trees stop tremble, to the heart. How very beautiful! *S* Any friend of yours is indeed lucky... for you listen not just to the heart... but with yours. *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we are all so lucky to be your special friends, and anyone would love to be your friend as you speak like the summer breeze and you are truly a still water running deep! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Martie....:-) I often visit the place of "start" where the "tremble of leaves is only fear, and perhaps deer" it seems that maybe you feel the presence of God in these places as this Pantheist does? Excellent poetry as always......ice |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God, Martie, how do you do this? tremble of leaves is only fear, and perhaps deer, a place unnamed where one sits and talks to the start? what we just dont see or wish to . . . amazing writing xxoo |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
adding to library and a bump! |
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