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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-09-03 04:02 AM



Rainy Day


I am saving my time
for when the moment is right
then will gladly spend it
all on your rainy day
we will count every
saved penny-ed second
spent given in the
greatest gift received
so I am saving
saving for a rainy day
where I can be hopelessly
extended in stretch
when I am drawn
like a breath
spent in my savings

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-09-03 04:16 AM


As I have said before Helen:

pure liquid grace . . .

we will count every
saved penny-ed second
spent given in the
greatest gift received

xxoo

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-09-03 04:21 AM


Your words are stunning..
suthern
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3 posted 2003-09-03 01:33 PM


we will count every
saved penny-ed second
spent given in the
greatest gift received

Someone will be rich indeed. *S* This is lovely!

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03
Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines
4 posted 2003-09-04 01:32 PM


Such a unique attitude, and the talent to back it up! I like this place. I like it very much.
vandana
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5 posted 2003-09-04 02:25 PM


enjoy your read
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