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Master
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0 posted 2003-09-02 02:06 AM



Ten minutes seemed like an eternity.
We were still strangers. All the same,
I loved you ardently and fervently.
I never even knew your name.

When music stopped, we kept on dancing.
You went as quickly as you came.
You took my breath with you and gasping,
I never even asked your name.

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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-09-02 02:11 AM


Wow..

The last lines
made this so..

I don't know how to describe, but it was a good feeling.

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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2 posted 2003-09-02 02:18 AM


The last lines made this breathtaking.I wrote something similar in the mature forum but with my perspective.Glad to see someone else's view on this.Well penned and beautifully done.
Crystal

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3 posted 2003-09-02 06:56 AM


sometimes its better not to know their name......
go Yanks..........

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