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angelblueyes
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0 posted 2003-09-02 01:28 AM


Sometimes it seems as if there's nowhere I can go.
From the pain inside me that seems to overflow.
Darkness that surrounds my heart.
Chipping away at each little part.
The pain that surrounds it seems so real.
The sadness is too much that I feel.
My heart trying to break through the wall of despair.
Trying so hard to make the repairs.
Feels like I've been locked up and thrown away the key.
How do I get this turmoil out of me?
Like a theif in the night.
Shaking completly with so much fright.
My tears falling endlessly.
Crying and crying inside of me.
Take the knife and cut my heart in two.
That would be so much easier to do.
My pillow is now soaked with tears.
Of pains come and gone over the years.
I know somehow I'll finally break free.
And then my heart can deeply breathe.
Chipping away the darkness and fright.
Taking back it's beating life.
Filling it with the brightness of light.
Giving it back eternal life.

Crystal

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-09-02 01:30 AM


Sadness ..
our muses seem to indulge on it.

Wonderful write.

angelblueyes
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2 posted 2003-09-02 01:33 AM


Karou:Thank you, it's just a part of me and a feeling at this moment in time.This too will surely pass and so will your's my friend
Crystal

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3 posted 2003-09-02 02:36 AM


very well expressed,,,

         


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4 posted 2003-09-02 05:58 AM


Crystal . . . the key is knowing that now is pain, but shall pass which you do know
The NOW is what is the hurdle, m'friend
This I do know quite well
beautiful writing
xxoo  

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5 posted 2003-09-02 06:09 AM


I know somehow I'll finally break free.
And then my heart can deeply breathe.
Chipping away the darkness and fright.
Taking back it's beating life.
Filling it with the brightness of light.
Giving it back eternal life.


Crystal, this is beautiful, though sad. And, just
hold on, because the ending you wrote above will come
to pass sooner or later.
Hugs  
Ethel


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6 posted 2003-09-02 09:38 AM


Crystal~
In time's passing ... I would wish your own thoughts back to you~

'I know somehow I'll finally break free.
And then my heart can deeply breathe'


Drop me an email ... okay ?
noles1@totcon.com

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com   

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7 posted 2003-09-02 10:00 AM


you paint the pain and the time well..

nicely done...

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8 posted 2003-09-02 12:08 PM


I know somehow I'll finally break free.
And then my heart can deeply breathe.
Chipping away the darkness and fright.
Taking back it's beating life.
Filling it with the brightness of light.
Giving it back eternal life.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

just give it time...it always happens

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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9 posted 2003-09-02 12:22 PM


Oh, Crystal that is some emotive, plaintiff write! Sounds too real to just be poetry!

~ May the sun, the moon and the stars guide you along your life's path with divine Light.

Loving, healing hugs,
Linda

angelblueyes
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10 posted 2003-09-02 01:35 PM


QJQ:Thank you

littlewing:Thanks,I know it will pass some days are just harder than others.You are a sweet lady

Ethel:Thanks my sweet friend.I know it will it just takes time

Marge:Thanks.You are a true angelic lady.Will do

Cpat:Thanks, I guess it seems to help to release this in this way.

Crystal

angelblueyes
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11 posted 2003-09-02 01:38 PM


Kristie Sue:Thanks I will for time is the healer of all hearts

Linda:Thank you so much.You are truly a sweet friend to have.You are as precious as a newborn child with the spirit that flies with the angels

Crystal


JamesMichael
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12 posted 2003-09-03 08:57 PM


We all have our share of pain...James
angelblueyes
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13 posted 2003-09-03 09:02 PM


James:So true, but within my frineds and family we shall make this pain pass.
Crystal

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14 posted 2003-09-03 09:20 PM


Crystal, it's good you're able to write and get those dark, sad feelings out!

Again, I offer to have you email me!

Hugs, Marti

Nature always tends to act in the simplest way.
~ Bernoulli ~

angelblueyes
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15 posted 2003-09-03 09:26 PM


Marti:Thank you so much.Without these writes I would be a bitter spirit adn a mean soul.So this releases it.I would gladly email you, but I know your adress.
Crystal

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16 posted 2003-09-04 09:55 AM


enjoy your words
El_Campeador
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17 posted 2003-09-04 10:34 AM


I hope you will fond that day when you'll break free soon, Crystal. Thank you for sharing your heart with us.

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

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18 posted 2003-09-04 11:53 AM


But..hey don't feel that way you are such an angel..one of the sweetest peeps around. So don't feel like that...makes me sad...Hey I know...wanna go for a ride in my 70 Chevy SS....I'll ride shotgun...You can drive...Wow I can't believe I said that...now you know I really like you...giving someone the keys...hehehe Just kidding... Don't feel that way...you deserve alot more than that.....


SharaRose @-->--

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-04-2003 11:55 AM).]

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19 posted 2003-09-04 03:31 PM


Chipping away the darkness and fright.
Taking back it's beating life.
Filling it with the brightness of light.
Giving it back eternal life.

So much heartache... but you end on a note of hope... I hope this transition comes soon for you! *S* I like your work very much. *S*

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