Between Seasons (Tima's Challenge)

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Open Poetry #28

Between Seasons (Tima's Challenge)

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-09-02 01:08 AM

I was born
where
colors match
or collide.

Leaves
have a tendency
to arrange themselves
for benefit of
the eye..

Water frozen in
a wishing well..

I was born
between
seasons..

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-09-02 01:11 AM

perfect (g'nite)

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (09-02-2003 01:11 AM).]

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

2 posted 2003-09-02 01:18 AM

I like this.A different perspective.

Crystal

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

3 posted 2003-09-02 01:18 AM

Wonderful writing lady! Thank you so much!
You guys are great!

Tima

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-09-02 01:23 AM

Very very nice Meg!

Susan

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-09-02 05:39 AM

Meg, this is perfect . . .
seamless and unending . . .

born between seasons . . . yesssss
challenge met beautifully
xxoo

heartpiper
Member

since 2003-09-02

Posts 57

6 posted 2003-09-02 06:44 AM

"Leaves
have a tendency
to arrange themselves
for benefit of
the eye.."

Its the bounty of your emotion that was able to catch this scene..

Thanx
Iyad

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-09-02 06:48 AM

Beautiful, Meghan.

Hugs

Ethel

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-09-02 06:51 AM

i was born between seasons,,,,,
yes i feel this too
and i was between the dead of winter and the rebirth of spring

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

9 posted 2003-09-02 08:13 AM

Your choice of words in this one is excellent... I love the thought of colors colliding and leaves arraying themselves.

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2003-09-02 08:48 AM

where
colors match
or collide.

Leaves
have a tendency
to arrange themselves
for benefit of
the eye..

Splendiferous!

A challenge well met.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

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