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Velvet Smooth
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Velvet Smooth |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Settle down, the deep blue night Prophetic glow of clouds alight Trill harmonic August clear Heightened hearing, inner ear Calm, a prickled summer star Mellow sonnet left ajar Peepers chipper lady slipper Kisses called ‘neath little dipper Melody of night confounding Building rhythm sound surrounding Cleared debris of packed full day Falls night music swept away Unpretentious deep blue sky Fond above, kept watchful eye Orchestrate the songs of soothe Fold me into velvet smooth Copyright Kkh 8/31/03 [This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (09-01-2003 10:37 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - this read like a great song, rhyme is wonderful... BC |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is absolutely beautiful,smooth,and tender.Like the spirit of your heart.  Crystal |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
TD~ This was rhythmic and beautiful... Velvet smooth...ahh, yes.. Susan |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
like a sweet romantic melody this write serenades one's heart,,, |
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